Tears in a snowflake

Well, haven't written a poem in so long... here goes nothing...

 It's been three years since your voice entered my head

              Christmas time isn't what is use to be

     I try to remember the last thing you said

    It all seems to be getting too dark to see

    Tears roll down my pale, blank face

     I look through the halls to glimpse at the past

    This is now just a very dark place

     It's all just happened so fast

     Voices in my head scream out dark things

    I fall onto the bed with a cry

      One of the voices is yours, it devilishly sings

    "Why couldn't you save me.... why"

Author's Note

Christmas is really hard ever since pappy passed away :/

Reviews

[Botania]

A stunning write. Evokes powerful emotion. Well done.

[sakshi arora]

the melancholy is echoing. Your pain has aggressively been painted by u . i liked the title but i would suggest u to edit few lines to make it even more beautiful . I can understand when we write in the flow of emotions we just write it staright away.