Death is fate

Fate works in really odd ways, it could be dangerous

The halls echo with haunting laughter
As the guest's in the ballroom hold each other and sway
The lively ones would scream thereafter
None would see the light of day

Oh poor Miss Wilder, so young and fair
Her fate was imbedded inside a twelve-gauge
The date held her arm as he blew her away with a heartless stare
Now blood and brains mixed with her beautiful dreams of being onstage

All the guest's were too busy drinking and laughing to hear
The screams and cries that drew the crows from their nest
The man held her in his arms, shedding one or two tears
But he thought it was for the best

The party ended with screams of pain
The man who was as quiet as a mouse lashed out in hate
Everyone in the hotel were slain
The lives of everyone were ended by the twist of fate

Author's Note

Hope everyone likes it :P I know it's dark, but I'm in that sort of mood

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

This was more like a story and really wasn't
too Gory to me personally.


Felt like I was in the 1950's I don't know
why but I loved this I have seen much more
dark this had emotion and feeling and some
Melancholy in it and it has inspired me a bit.


As I will read this again.


Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.


blessings. kindred poet

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Thank you so much ^*^ I'm so glad you liked it ^*^

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're very welcome. it's my pleasure always. blessings. kindred poet


I have other dark poems this is a dark one it is older It's called Wicked Addiction of love it was inspired by the dark photo
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/GiggleBuG79/1329105/


Then this one is more like horror dark Psychotic insane
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/GiggleBuG79/1352015/
this one is called past Ghost of the Asylum


If you want to look it's up to you at either one of them.

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

I think I'll like the second one :3 I have a fascination with asylums lol

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Great if you want to check out past Ghost of the Asylum that's the URL to the poem :) have a blessed afternoon my friend. Kindred poet :)

[Chloe_Spence]

Fantastic poem :) Sharp, crisp and vivid imagery.