The excitement of the night

    I walk with a stride down a busy street

 Feeling the signs blink and the wind breeze through my hair

   I walk the street without a worry or care

 This is where all the people meet

   I hear laughing and dancing from the local club

And feel the breath of the sweet Vampires on my neck

  I know it's them, but don't even bother to check

 Everyone's attention is focused on the hub

   The smell of cheap perfume and Cigarettes is thick in the air

 The night seems to be the only friend of mine

    The Vampires strike and I feel a lovely chill down my spine

  And the night flashes up in a flare

 

Author's Note

I really enjoyed writing this :) Hope you all enjoy! Leave a review ^*^

Reviews

[luna rose]

Really cool imagery. Especially with the inclusion of "vampires" (I'm assuming that they're females?). I only assume their femininity because I just finished reading Bram Stoker's 'Dracula' in which the vampire was a symbol of the "sexualized female in Victorian society". I digress.

Lovely poem!

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

I am very glad you liked it ^*^ Yes, their females :) I hope you like the rest of my work :)

[Rose Black]

Loved it so dark and sexy... As long as the vampires are not twilight style lol XD

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Absolutely not, I despise twilight. I pictured the Vampires would look like succubus's >X< I'm so glad you like it :)

[Rose Black]

Totally agree =D you're welcome

[Awakened Rose]

I loved this write and how it had a darker twist as you read along. Very intriguing! Thank you for sharing :)

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

I'm very glad you liked it :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Awesome write, i loved it. Nicely written.

Kaze~

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Thank you so much :) I'm glad you liked it. It to me shows the honest feel of Times Square in New York ^*^

[&#9812; CrownedDevil &#9790;]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Zahra]

really very nice. I did enjoy this. Well penned

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Thank you so much :) Some one on here yesterday told me I should quit writing poetry and stories, but you know what, I'm not. I do this because I love to :)

[Zahra]

well we don't simply quit what we love because someone asks us to

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

I would never quit writing poetry, it's what keeps me going ya know ^*^

[Zahra]

yeah creativity is great way of self expression. Keep writing and growing

[BeautifullyxBrokenx]

Very nice :) the story I have posted The V Word is actually all vampires :p

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

:D thank you sooo much :) I'm so glad you liked it :)