The Dark Rider of the other-world

     He rides through the misty mountains of the north

  And through the Forest's of the south

      Seeking vengeance for the torment of his kind

  So he rides fast and hard to journey forth

      The rider journeys towards the lost kingdom

    One last time must he see the memories of his past

       Smoke and ash still fly amongst the wreckage

    This great place once held much great wisdom

     So with much anger he rides to the south

  He kills all who stare, with a slash of his blade

      'Till he finally reaches the kingdom of wealth

   If you listened hard enough you could still hear his blade call out

So he killed the once mighty king and all who challenged him

 Burning the kingdom of wealth to the very earth

He rode off towards a new village, but none welcomed him

  This rider was forever know then after as, The grim

      

   

Author's Note

hope you all like it :) leave a review after

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

I like this, but at the same time I ask if this was something to be more than it was? In some wording I musk if you held one or three emotions or lusts emotions on the back burner? I felt like this was a nice strong sauce for the main course. What is our signature dish?

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Honestly, I was listening to the lord of the rings soundtrack and I just wrote this out, it sounded terrible the first time, I had to touch it up a little bit, but this was one of my first poems, you might enjoy the recent ones I've written :) but I'm glad you like this also.

[Fire Mage Andrea]

Quite dramatic and vivid.
I like the contrasts between the North and the South : "He rides through the misty mountains of the north
And through the Forest's of the south"

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Thank you :) so glad you liked it

[Ravyne Hawke]

Wonderful carnage poem... I love the narrative of this, the story is well told with vivid imagery. Another wonderful poem.

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

I just did this one last night :) I was listening to the lord of the rings soundtrack and the next thing I know this comes out lol :) glad you like it

[Ravyne Hawke]

That is a good soundtrack for writing as reflected in your poem =)

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

:) Im so glad you liked all my poems, I'm planning on writing a few more today :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

Awesome! Send RRs and I will check them out as soon as this nasty little storm passes

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

:) ok I will

[Brittany Zedalis]

I enjoy your style of poetry. This is very mystical and pulls the reader in. Great job! :]

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Thank you very much :) Im glad you liked it

[Margo Seuss]

I can see why I was requested to read this! Good one! I like the air of mystery in it.

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Thank you so much :D I'm glad everyone likes it so much :)

[Zahra]

Interesting, nicely penned. Liked this. Very nice

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Than you :) Im really glad you liked it

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

*Thank you

[Zahra]

you're welcome :)

[kitty cat]

hey nice writing, this one a the peter pan one is my fav

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Thanks :) glad you like them

[kitty cat]

your welcome

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing write, I loved it. Nicely written. :-)

Kaze~

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Thank you so much :) I think this is my favorite I have written :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

:-) This one and the peter pan one is my fav.

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Really :) I'm glad people like my writing

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

I love it. :-)