Prologue: My Name Sucks.

Prologue: My Name Sucks.

A Chapter by Some Random Person.

My name sucks. If you ever knew my real name, you would say the same. Who the hell would name their kid this crapy name? IT's not even creative. It's just a dull, icky name. What the hell was my mother thinking, all those years ago? Who would name thier child this sulcky, sucky name? Who would be that thick, that mean, that annoying?  Well, obviously my mother, I suppose. Still, who'd name a person this sucky name?

 

I wrote that down on my diary. I hated my name. Suddenly, my mother's voice yelled it, telling the holder of the name to get downstairs. I sighed, putting my journal down on my bed. I extended my long legs and lept off my bed. Running down the stairs, I tried to think of new names I could go by, as I always did. Soon enough, if I thought of one, I could go by it, then change my name when I'm finally eighteen.

 

Hello, random people reading my life. My name is Flyper Emerse Kril. I'm seventeen years old. This is the story of my unhappy life. This is how I managed school.



© 2011 Some Random Person.


Author's Note

Some Random Person.
So... How wwas it so far? I'm still kinda iffy about it... Seams like theres so many books already with this ideaq in print... I don't know...

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I thought I already read this, but seems you have changed it and liked this version better. Emailed the corrections.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Interesting wow I really hope thats not the name she's making it up to be (Owe Doctor Who!) sorry distracted from profile. Anyways can't wait to read more to see another method to the survival of school.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Flyper Emerse Kril...aha I see.... wonder how it's prononouned

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Nothing wrong with it at all. Constructivley though, Consider giving a bit more empnasis to some sentances by setting them apart. For example...
My name sucks.
If you knew my...
I hope that makes sense. Yes. There are a lot of stories along the same lines out there. But how many of them are good? The only one I know of is A prayer for Owen Meany. That's it. I like the feel of this. It is honest and clean. Go for it and develop it more. I'm looking forward to reading it.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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So if all of ya'll will help me pay for college, that'd be great... http://www.gofundme.com/jhx73o For all you Doctor Who obsessing people... Don't say I hate you. But I do hate those Dale.. more..

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