Chapter Eleven: Once Upon A Moon

(Elijah's abduction)

When we got back to the hotel room, I asked Elizabeth if I could take a walk by my self. I didn't think she'd say yes, but she did. 

I went around the streets. I don't know which streets were going to where, but that hardly matters now, does it? I can shadow-travel back into the hotel room if I become lost and can't find my way back. That's exactly how I got to Colorado. Wait, I could go visit my grandparents. They live in Denver. I wondered for a few minutes if I could visit them. I thought about it, seeing their faces when they open the door. They'd ask how I got there, and if my parents knew about it. No, I think I'd better not do that. I don't even know what their new house looks like now, anyways.

I walked down more and more streets, and I kept thinking of two things: what Elizabeth's answer going to be, and my grandparents. I kept walking towards shadows, then forcing myself out of the shadows, making myself turn back. I am NOT going to Denver. They'll ask too many questions.

So what's Elizabeth's answer going to be? She took me to Aisha's house, then here. If she's going to say no, then she's just plain rude. I just hope that she'd say yes. I turned on to another road and started running faster. Next thing I know, I'm on the highway towards Denver. Not thinking, I ran off the side of the road, flying through the cool Colorado summer air, and shadow traveled to a dark alley in Glenwood right before I hit the rocks. I'm sure I surprised a couple of people, but it certainly was fun.

I walked on the streets at night alone. I know hat it's a big mistake, wlaking alone, but I needed to clear my mind. Cool it down, if you will. It was cold outside, and the mountains were covered with snow at the top. I turned a corner, and got a large, freezing cold blast of wind, and I almost fell over. I ran back into the dark alley I was in. Turning around, and starting to walk, someone came up, and put there arms around my neck, with me screaming, pulling me into the darkness of the boxes of tar on the side of the alleyway. And... And, I fainted, not to wake up for a long, long time.

Author's Note

Ooh... And the plot thickens... :)

1. How was it?
2. Do you wish It was more in depth?
3. Do you like that the abduction was mysterious.
4. Where did he go?
5. Who do you think abducted Elijah?
6. What's Elizabeth going to say?
7. Can you wait until the next chapter?
8. Do you want me to write it quickly?

I lost my password to my computer, but I still have the internet and my notebook! :D

Reviews

[Sleepless]

oh please keep on going elizabeth better say yes !!!:)

[Some Random Person.]

Just for future referance, I meant what is she going to say about Elijah being missing?

[Short.Nerd]

1. Amazing.
2. A little.
3. YES
4. No clue O.o
5. ELIZABETH"S EVIL COUSIN
6. Uh oh? XD

[compositionc]

1. AWESOME.
2. NO.
3. I WAS LIKE HOLY F**K WHAT THE F**K IS GOING ON
5. your mom
4. TO THE UNDERRRRRRRRRRRRRWORLD
6. YES. OF COURSE. DUH.
8. YES. YEAH.
7. NO

[M Garcia]

1. Good
2. No its the perfect length
3. Yes
4. Good question
5. No clue but can't wait to find out
6. Probably no but she could surprise and say yes
7. Nope
8. Yes please.
Also in the end you misspelled a couple words 'hat' I think you meant 'that' and 'wakling' should be 'walking'