I love the feeling of this poem, and I like your candid and straightforward lines, and the flow of it, like Poetic Wolf said. I like the questions you ask and everything, it makes your poem more unique. Awesome job!
That was a fabulous flow down a mental roller-coaster of relationships! I love all the repetition in the piece. It made for mind to really think to keep up and pay attention to the overall meaning. Once at the end, the switch up on the last line is great. It really goes to show us all the sometimes, questions are the only answers that come out when asking questions.
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