Adventure to the Dark Alley

Elizabeth:

 

“Alright, what do you want me to do to help him?” I asked the werewolf.

 

Come with me, alone. He replied back in mind-talk. I guessed he meant that I couldn’t tell Elijah. It killed me. Don’t even try to contact him. Ugh! I really should. I mean, it’s his brother! He’ll panic, don’t tell him.

 

“Fine, I’m coming. Where are we going?” I was wondering greatly. Wait, Elijah said that he turned on Beethoven Avenue. Is that where Nate is? Yes, Gertinald replied to my great sadness. I don’t want to go down there again, and I’m sure that Elijah doesn’t either.

 

I understand why you don’t want to go there, but think about Nathan. The werewolf told me.

 

I know, I know! I’m coming, alright? I sent back to him, annoyed, then got a blanket, a knife, and my shoes on, and set out through my bedfoom window. I sent a message to Elijah to come out, but he never replied. I ran to Central Street then changed so that I could run faster, and before I knew it, I was on the Avenue of Scary.

 

I walked down it, but changed out of my change quickly. I didn’t want to be known here with the were-thing. I walked down, and approached the darkest alley. Voices kept telling me to stay away, but Gertinald told me to go on down the alley. Was it a trap? Maybe Gertinald was the one who kills or turns innocent children, like Greyback in Harry Potter. Maybe he was going to trick me then have a friend hurt Elijah or kill his family? Maybe my family?

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Elijah

 

At midnight, I got Elizabeth’s silent message. She told me it was urgent, and I needed to come to Beethoven Avenue. At first I thought nothing of it, but then I remembered that that place was where I turned. She knows about Nathan being missing, she’d also said  not to be very visable.

 

I sent back to her, K. Coming. What is so urgent on Beethoven Avenue? She never replied. I thought she might not have received it. As soon as everyone was asleep, I crept out of the door and slipped away. I ran to Central St. then changed forms to run faster. It was almost 1:10 a.m. when I finally got there. I looked up and down the strange street then walked into the bushes on a dark alley. Then a couple of minutes later, I saw Elizabeth with something else. Who was that guy, and why is he with her? Then I sent her a message. Who is that? Why are you-I here? What is it? Maybe our nonverbal conversations were being blocked. Maybe that guy was listening on, that creep. I want to hurt him, but I can’t. I have to stay hidden and try to alert Elizabeth another way. A way without  him noticing, peering into our lives.

Author's Note

Okay, so I added Elijah's POV in here... How did you like it?

I can't think about how to make this longer... Oh well, there'll be longer chapters later, I promise.

Reviews

[Esther Night]

confussed about the frist person. other than its it thrilling and leaves a wonder

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought you did a nice job on this. I love how Elizabeth didn't bother to listen to the guy. I bet he is going to get mad if he finds out. I can't wait to read on. Thanks for sharing.

[Short.Nerd]

Another very good chapter.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong and entertaining chapter. I like the situation and the events in this chapter. Hanging with werewolf. Never know what may happen? A excellent chapter.
Coyote

[Some Random Person.]

Yes, Jessi, these werewolves aren't traditional and can easily change when they want.

[Jessi Berlasty]

Hm, when you switch point of view, don't say which point of view it is. It kind of looks unprofessional. In a few chapters in my book, I'm switching point of views, but I'm switching to third person so it is visible, but I don't state that this is the person's point of view.

"She knows about Nathan being missing, She’d(lowercase) also said it was urgent,(omit) and not to be very visable(visible)."

A good chapter. Are the werewolves not traditional? They can change at will?