Introduction.

 

Introduction:

Charlie “Crazzios” Mators, who made fun of his age, being weird and all, loved to write... Crazy was what most people called him. He got the name Crazzios because, well, he was crazy and because of his love for pizza, Mazzios being his favorite restraunt. He hung with the creative crowd. Want evidence of them being creative? Doesn’t the name Crazzios count as evidence? I sure think it should.

                

Either way, Charlie was as creative as the people he hung with. He wrote many stories, one for a different person in his little “group.” He wrote about 15 books, giving a signed copy to 15 different people in the group. There is a girl named Jenna, and she just loves romance-fantasies. She also loved ghost stories

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                I was in my car listening to my favorite song on the European Radio Station, The Noah Plan. Then, out of nowhere, I saw a ghost getting closer. The station automatically switched itself to Book Radio, and some old guy was reading a tail called “The Hitchhiker.” I kept it on because it was an interesting story, and, well, it was most definitely fun to listen to. Then I saw the same ghost again, and again! When will I quit seeing him? He was creepy! 

This ghost-thing really started keeping me anxious, and I was only driving home. I was a couple of blocks away from my house when I saw him again, which really, really scared me. I decided to make a turn around at the colisak and go back to my house, but when I got into my driveway and opened my garage door, he was inside the actual garage. 

Author's Note

Okay, so I decided that there'd be a Charlie Mators series. Here's the second book, and the introduction to it! :)

Do you like the idea? How is it so far?

I still am not so sure about this, but we'll see where this takes us.

Reviews

[Chloe]

well I wasn't very sure if i added enough detail to the evidence as i did the first chapter but now i am kinda of regreting not describing it as much

[Short.Nerd]

I like the introductin:) Keep up the good work!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong introduction. Now where are you taking the story?
Coyote

[Jessi Berlasty]

"Want evidence of them being creative?" Hm, I think more can be added to the evidence. The thick eyeliner masking their eyes, the silly hats they wore to school every day down to their mismatched socks.

A much better focus on what's going on as a whole than with one particular person. Keep it like this, add lots and lots of detail, and don't make your characters a Bella Swan! More than one dimension to them. I like to love to hate characters in stories.