Fire Star

A poem I wrote when I was bored

Fire in the sky,

burning all away,

Bright red and yellow,

in the bright blue sky,

Coming far to Earth,

As fast as it could.

Star in the Sky,

Far and Bright,

Red and Yellow,

Full of Fire,

Coming toward Earth,

Coming toward Home.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The sky is the last free place to go. They haven't figure a way to pollute the moon yet. Won't be long. A very nice poem. The Poets of old loved the mystery of the sky. Love and great dreams were create by the stars and the moon. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[compositionc]

You repeat the words sky and yellow a lot, but overall, it was very nicely done.

[Jessi Berlasty]

"in the bright blue sky" You forgot to capitalize the first letter.

[Short.Nerd]

I love this! It was wonderful. The imagery and flow was amazing. Nice job!