The Family, The Book, The Wish

Introduction. Note: is very short.

Charlie “Crazzios” Mators, who made fun of his age, being weird and all, loved to write... Crazy was what most people called him. He got the name Crazzios because, well, he was crazy and because of his love for pizza, Mazzios being his favorite restraunt. He hung with the creative crowd. Want evidence of them being creative? Doesn’t the name Crazzios count as evidence? I sure think it should.

                Either way, Charlie was as creative as the people he hung with. He wrote many stories, one for a different person in his little “group.” He wrote about 15 books, giving a signed copy to 15 different people in the group. The last one was called Wish Upon A Star, which was a nice book about a large mystery which was averted by wishes by a person whose name is Elijah.

The Book

Elijah was the oldest of three children: Nate, the youngest and most inexperienced; Haylee, the only girl, middle child, and the couch potato of the unusual family; and last, but not least , Elijah himself, the crazy blond who never thought twice about playing baseball.

But none of that is necessary information. Elijah had a few wishes, most of which he never mentioned.  Nevertheless, there was one outstanding wish, that he could be a normal kid.  All he really wanted was to be normal. He also had anemones friends who did things. Weird, evil, crazy things that weren’t wanted. No one knows why he was with them, but all that matters in this case because of what happened on the 12^th of August on Beethoven Avenue, Siloam Springs, Arkansas.

It was around dusk; no one knows why he was there. Beethoven Ave. has alleyways perpendicular to the strange street. Beethoven Ave. also has weird people living in the houses and alleys. Drugs, Alcohol, guns, gangs, you name it, it’s there. So why was Elijah on Beethoven Avenue?

Reviews

[.quan.011.]

drug, alcohol, guns, and gangs, sound like it is my kind of story. Great Introduction, can't wait to read more .

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[halflives]

Excellent introduction. You immediately drew me in. Reading on, anxiously.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really interesting introduction. Moving on to the next chapter!

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[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Quite short and almost tolerated childishness, a good introduction to the character of plotting, well done.

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[Daydreamer54]

you shouldn't tell us abiut his personality and his siblings perosonalities, show us instead.
other than that, intresting beginning

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I like the introduction to the story as well. I like the start. It keeps me interested. I can't wait to read the first chapter. Thanks for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong introduction to the story. You create interesting characters and storyline. I will read the next chapter.
Coyote

[Some Random Person.]

The picture is the real family. Going from left to right is the Dad, Elijah, Haylee, Nate, and the Mom.

[~Lizzy♬]

I really loved this introduction. :) You're doing very well.

~Bookers~ (Lizzard)

[Cassie316]

He was looking for the sand lot so he could go try playing baseball?? I feel like this short story is a riddle... but I'm not sure i guessed it..