Destiny

A Poem by Dpoet

Having the right person in your life

You are like the bright sun
Brightening my day with your smile
You are like the lit fireplace
Warming my soul with your embrace
You are like the everflowing river
Quenching my thirst with your words
How lucky I am
To have such a person beside me
Shielding me against the dark world
Healing my wounds with your affection
Valuing me with your attention
I know it will not go away
Because this is destiny
It will not fade away

© 2024 Dpoet

Author's Note

Love is in the air!

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Reviews

Amy R

What a lovely little poem,
"You are like the lit fireplace
Warming my soul with your embrace" My absolute favorite lines...

"Shielding me against the dark world
Healing my wounds with your affection
Valuing me with your attention" felt this., beautiful really.

Thanks for sharing.
-Amy

Posted 5 Months Ago

5 Months Ago

Thanks for your review,I also love those lines too since they go very deep

5 Months Ago

Exactly, you're welcome.

Sami Khalil

A winner of a poem; romantic and sweet. Enchanting lines to the one directed to.
Kudos!

Posted 5 Months Ago

5 Months Ago

Thank you,maybe one day I'll direct it to you😂😂😂just joking,I appreciate your recognition

5 Months Ago

Wow! You are welcome.

Brad Dehler

This is a sweet and thoughtful poem. Good Job! Keep up the work on your poetry. You have a lot of love to share. That is a good thing.

Posted 5 Months Ago

5 Months Ago

Thank you for your encouragement,I really hope to share my love with all of you

Marie

Wow! What a very beautiful, warm, sweet, tender and very romantic poem! The poet is so appreciative of the love he has, he treasures it and is grateful for it. I love the perfect rhythm and rhyme of the poem, the effortless flow of the words, the depiction of the love he has won, which is his alone and I love the title of the poem, it drew me in to read it. Thank you for sharing your excellently penned poem, Dpoet. I so enjoyed reading...