Destiny

Having the right person in your life

You are like the bright sun
Brightening my day with your smile
You are like the lit fireplace
Warming my soul with your embrace
You are like the everflowing river
Quenching my thirst with your words
How lucky I am
To have such a person beside me
Shielding me against the dark world
Healing my wounds with your affection
Valuing me with your attention
I know it will not go away
Because this is destiny
It will not fade away

Author's Note

Love is in the air!

Reviews

[Amy R]

What a lovely little poem,
"You are like the lit fireplace
Warming my soul with your embrace" My absolute favorite lines...

"Shielding me against the dark world
Healing my wounds with your affection
Valuing me with your attention" felt this., beautiful really.

Thanks for sharing.
-Amy

[Dpoet]

Thanks for your review,I also love those lines too since they go very deep

[Amy R]

Exactly, you're welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

A winner of a poem; romantic and sweet. Enchanting lines to the one directed to.
Kudos!

[Dpoet]

Thank you,maybe one day I'll direct it to you😂😂😂just joking,I appreciate your recognition

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! You are welcome.

[Brad Dehler]

This is a sweet and thoughtful poem. Good Job! Keep up the work on your poetry. You have a lot of love to share. That is a good thing.

[Dpoet]

Thank you for your encouragement,I really hope to share my love with all of you

[Marie]

Wow! What a very beautiful, warm, sweet, tender and very romantic poem! The poet is so appreciative of the love he has, he treasures it and is grateful for it. I love the perfect rhythm and rhyme of the poem, the effortless flow of the words, the depiction of the love he has won, which is his alone and I love the title of the poem, it drew me in to read it. Thank you for sharing your excellently penned poem, Dpoet. I so enjoyed reading...

[Dpoet]

Thank you so much for your heartfelt words,it truly means alot to know that a poet like yourself enjoys my work I really hope u also like the others,Marie

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear poet. Thank you again for sharing...