If I....

If I....

A Poem by Brandon Taylor-Black
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If I Asked...what would the answer be?

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If I held you

Would you touch me?

If I kissed you

Would you smile?

If I loved you

Would you Love me back

If I asked

Would you stay the night?

If I looked in your eyes

Would you see me?

If I took your heart

Would you take mine?

If I took all your problems

Would you rest easy? 

If we were one

Would our souls intertwine?

If I told you just how much I'm feeling

Would you tell me just how much you care?

If I promised to always be with you

Would you promise to always be there?

© 2008 Brandon Taylor-Black


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I too would hope that the correct person reading it would say yes to all of those questions.
This is a good write...you can't keep showing us all up like this...well written

Posted 16 Years Ago


If you asked what would the answer be...It would have to be yes to all those questions.
It gives you a sense of what if i asked these questions and the answer was no, Lots of loved ppl would be disappointed, its not much of a relationship if all these questions were answered negative instead of positive.
Nicely penned and thought out.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 24, 2008

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Brandon Taylor-Black
Brandon Taylor-Black

Huddersfield



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I write for pleasure, and for therapeutic reasons...it relaxes me. Why exist in the real world when my own world holds such splendor? That's enough about me though, please, read away, and if you f.. more..

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