Pay Back

*BUZZ*

[Hey Mary, got time to chat?]

[Get lost Anna, go run off some of that 'baby' fat]

[Rudeness! but anyway, where you at?]

[Not that it matters... but why do you even care about that?]

[lol. why don't you come by? Got a surprise for you.

You may hate how I look... can't say the same about your boo!]

[What? Stop playing Ana, i'll find you and i'll ruin you]

[You already ruined everything. You know its true!!

You made my life hell, you gotta learn how it feels as well]

***

[Come over to say goodbye. Cus from here forth, Luke is mine]

Reviews

[Stacy Purvis]

Is this the beginning of a play or skit? Perhaps it could be thoughts from inside a girl's head...like planning an upcoming conversation?
At any rate, it sounds...hmmmm mean girlish. Right?
I have to agree with Mr. Writer...sounds like this girl is planning revenge!
Is the girl's name Anna or Ana? Are the girls at the Eating Disorder Clinic?
I'm wondering if the two stories are connected?

[Jessica Lima]

its a text message convo, between a popular girl and a curvy girl. You know how super skinny girls look at other girl like they are fat? And I left the errors because when Mary got mad her typing became frantic. Its Anna tho!

[Stacy Purvis]

Ah, well...what if you are a curvy girl who is really popular? :DDD Curvy is great, yanno.

[Hope]

Interesting work, Jessica!
Something out of the ordinary.......
Enjoyed it....

[Scerina Elizabeth]

Dang good piece - love it!

[Jessica Lima]

haha thank you. People are always on their phone, so I wanted to do something with text messaging.

[Scerina Elizabeth]

That is so true and I totally agree with that forreal :)

[The Iron Horseman]

I don't know whether you intended it to make me smile, but it did! Thank you, I enjoyed this.

[Jessica Lima]

it was an empowerment piece so smiling is allowed lol. I hate bullying. and I hate ppl say you shouldn't fight back. how else can ppl defend themselves?

[The Iron Horseman]

I couldn't agree more. I have hated bullies all my life. Take the battle to them, I say. They are all cowards at heart, so once you have them on the run they will avoid you like the plague!

[Mr.Writer]

Woah! I smell revenge coming...
The rhymes were well made and interesting...
Keep it up Jessica!

[Jessica Lima]

Thanks. I was worried on how this would come out. text messages r hard to fake.

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)