Sae-Chan

A poem I wrote for Sae-Chan of "Twin Star Exorcists"

An ancient tree protected the world.

Its roots spread from east to west.

One day one of its braches broke off,

And it became different from the rest.

A being of magic then took form

Oh how fast it was able to learn!!!

A little girl of long, long locks

Became a certain couple's concern.

How they loved that little girl!

Within minutes she melted mom's heart.

And with papa, as she called the male

She learned, and became very smart.

Time passed and all was well,

But the tree started to bleed.

A gate was open in Hell,

And demons came out to feed.

Mom and dad did all they could,

Alongside a hopeful humanity.

But the results were not very good,

One by one people lost their sanity.

Blood surrounded the little girl

As images flooded her tiny head,

She was part of the tree

And it had finally come for her.

The only way to close the gate

Was for her to return home.

Where she should always have been

To watch her loved ones from.

Crying she took her place

Leaving behind mom and dad

Of her there would be no trace

The only thing making her sad.

Reviews

[Mr.Writer]

Awe... Jessica! This is so unique and different from all the poetry around Writers cafe... Which makes it super special. (Even though it was from anime) I was engaged and loved your word placements and they were flowing well as well!
This fantastic poem represented the anime show very well!
Great job Jessica!

"Mom an dad did all they could,"
I believe the "an" should be "and" :)
Keep it up!

[Jessica Lima]

Thank You so much! I made the change you pointed out.

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[FireHawke57]

i feel like this is from an anime and if it's not it should, like i could write a whole story off of this... its amazing

[Jessica Lima]

It is an anime lol. called Twin start exorcists

[FireHawke57]

oh ill have to look it up

[apennylate]

A little girl of long locks using magic on mommy and daddy... Loved this... Nicely penned....

[pia]

This was so good!! And i loved the imagery!! It was really cute

[Jessica Lima]

Thank You!!!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Poem created images in my mind while reading..
Very good poem, touchy as well..very well written.
And i like that anime too.
Very good work

[Jessica Lima]

I am glad you liked it!

[Abhishek Asthana]

wow its so touchy...really liked this a lot...so nicely written... keep up the great work !!

[Jessica Lima]

I cried upon watching the episode so I was inspired! Thanks

[Stacy Purvis]

This is fabulous. I love the anime picture as well. Do you enjoy anime? I used to watch it constantly.
This poetry suits the chosen picture and vice-versa.
Wonderful writing, perfect choice of words.
Thank you for sharing! x

[Jessica Lima]

I love anime lol. Just finished twin star exorcists

[Stacy Purvis]

Never heard of it. Where can I find it?

[Jessica Lima]

CRUNCHYROLL app

[Stacy Purvis]

Daaannnggg...Gonna go find it and dl it. Thx!