Melody

The IMPORTANT thing
Is your ability to LOVE
NOT who loves you.

What you may GIVE
Not what you may GET
Makes this TRUE.

If I BREAK down
Don't ever FROW,
Play me a SOUND.

Of your HEART beating
Never STEERING
To other SHORES.

Reviews

[JoeM]

Very perceptive. That we may all behave as you portray when our heart breaks.

[Poeticme]

Very much thought went into this lovely lovely wirte, your very good, keep them coming

Poeticme

[Roch Ketchum]

Short, thoughtful and to the point.

Liked it very much

[Najam Us Saher]

Very thoughtful. I liked it ☺