High Flying

~High Flying~

She flys to the sky

Past the moon and the outrage

She flys so very high

Cupping her dreams in her hand

She springs up and takes her reveries

Making them a fierce reality

Determined to grasp her potential to no end

She rises up past the chains of her existence

Creates more hopes along light's lasting beams

Encounters reality and denies its gravity

She soars to her dreams

Reviews

[Nyu]

What a beautiful poem, I really enjoyed your description of thriving for something. This subject is very bright and inspiring. You added many insightful statements as well. Great work :)

[mattavelli]

Hi Danni, this is an inspiring poem. I'm curious. Is the moon angry?

[Danni]

The moon isn't angry. She's rising above any outrage in her life.

[mattavelli]

Got it. Thanks for sharing.

[alf]

Hi Danni. Although your poem speaks of hope I had a sense of inner sadness as I read this. Nicely penned, alf

[Danni]

Thank you!

[lonewolf225]

I like the writing style and the meaning of the poem it really makes me think. Nice work. Keep it up!!

[Danni]

Thanks! I definitely will. Your review is much appreciated.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for sharing and enjoyed reading it.

[Danni]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed :)