The End of the Rainbow

The end of the rainbow

Where many imagine a flourishing world

Where many different appearances and ideals might otherwise be

 

A wide array of dazzling colors

Which contains an end such as no other

 

A prosperous nation

Lovely songs, beautiful voices

Where rich aromas fill the air

Gold shines bright, like a star floating in our heavens

Diamonds sparkle and birds sing

How, oh how, one wonders

Could such a thing appear before an individual like me

 

But chaos strikes the rainbow

Rain falls, the colors start to quickly disappear

The elements conflict

And as a house divided among itself cannot stand,

The rainbow vanishes

 

Its eternal beauty is lost

The rainbow's end has appeared

 

Seasons change, and rainbows do too

Fortunately, when one ends

One appears anew

 

So the rainbow's memory

Lives on in the next

And the pattern will continue

Without ceasing to rest

 

The end of a rainbow is like a phoenix being reborn from its ashes

When rain comes, it is reborn again

Its admirable colors

Coming to no specific end

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[sonnie ibadah]

you paint a beautiful picture, your words flow smoothly....

[Danni]

Thank you!

[SyberRose]

Lovely words...makes me think of when i lived in Hawaii...I saw a lot of rainbows after it rained and the sun came out...nicely done...Rose

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I really like the visuals in this poem, it seems very peaceful until the rain crashes down. I actually passed under a rainbow before or at least that is how I explained it lol Under the rainbow the rain is so powerful! At least the one I went under lol xD who knows if I was actually under the rainbow but the thought is nice! lol I like how you stated that even the seasons and rainbows change, but they do return again which is always nice to look forward to!

Good Job!

[Danni]

Thank you so much! :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

^^ You're welcome!

[Penthesilea De Barbara]

B E A U T I F U L
I am speechless!
Its so perfect, I have no words good enough to describe it!
Shakespeare, back off!!!

~Babby

[Danni]

So sweet of you! Thanks

[nicolas taylor carlin]

I love the imagination that this poem inspires readers to explore

[Danni]

Thank you! That means so much to me. This poem was just rejected by a high school club's literary magazine, so it is wonderful that some appreciate it.

[nicolas taylor carlin]

I really like it they are stupid to not accept such piece

[Danni]

Thanks for your confidence in my writing :)

[Troy Henson]

Wonderful write. Youve captured the imagery well here.
Very nice.

Regards
Troy

[Danni]

Thank you for your critique! Much appreciated