He is.
A Poem by
Dizzy
Mine...
A blur of inception. Eyes so green.
Face of perfection .
Lips plump and pink
A lost direction.
Curly brown hair
Life's new infection.
Mucsles cascade deep
my perfect addiction .
© 2010 Dizzy
Reviews
Ty all for your Reviews. I'm sorry I've been offline for so long! It's gonna be hard catching up again. haha
Posted 13 Years Ago
I love this poem so much! The rhythm is perfect and I love how the words flow and you create a wonderful image with your descriptions. Truly amazing!
Posted 13 Years Ago
I love this poem so much! The rhythm is perfect and I love how the words flow and you create a wonderful image with your descriptions. Truly amazing!
I loved the strong emotion that this poem emits I really liked the boldness and overall structure of this piece I must read more of your work very well done
Posted 13 Years Ago
I loved the strong emotion that this poem emits I really liked the boldness and overall structure of this piece I must read more of your work very well done
wow, this poem was short but it was absolutely perfect. i loved the description and the ending was just right. good job!
Posted 13 Years Ago
wow, this poem was short but it was absolutely perfect. i loved the description and the ending was just right. good job!
Pros: I love the rhyming. And the description is good, though concise.
Cons: None that I can think of really.
Overall: A good poem.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Pros: I love the rhyming. And the description is good, though concise.
Cons: None that I can think of really.
Overall: A good poem.
Really good it is a matter of fact in style and just awesome as a whole.
Good work.
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I am in no way obligating you to read my work I enjoy reading poetry on this site and like to read and review whenever I can so thanks for the poem.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Really good it is a matter of fact in style and just awesome as a whole.
Good work.
*notice*
I am in no way obligating you to read my work I enjoy reading poetry on this site and like to read and review whenever I can so thanks for the poem.
Wow, I want that addiction, im so jealous lol
Posted 13 Years Ago
Wow, I want that addiction, im so jealous lol
wow. another great piece..this gives a new depth to love, I like how you decribe it as an addiction. =))
Posted 13 Years Ago
wow. another great piece..this gives a new depth to love, I like how you decribe it as an addiction. =))
addiction!
no wonder!
good job!
i liked it... :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
addiction!
no wonder!
good job!
i liked it... :)
this was So good :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
this was So good :)
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Added on December 18, 2010
Last Updated on December 18, 2010
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Dizzy Wichita, KS
About
So I Love My family and friends and Husband very much. I live Kansas but My heart is in California with my Family and friends. I LoVe MuSiC! ArT iS aMaZiNg ToO.
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