Cold Dream

I just wrote....

Frozen lips frosted and chapped,

Shivvering in this chill of wind,

Heart screaming to be let free,

Inside a cold chest cavity,

Hands shake and crack,

Numbing feeling is coming back,

Sudden warmth comes through,

Heart speeds up and mellows,

Frozen feet start to move,

Laying on top of ice caps,

Eyes froze open start to blink.

When did I start running,

and when did I stop.

Why can't I think?

Author's Note

I'm not sure...

Reviews

[Livenrite]

I really like this piece. Thanks for sharing:)

[Robin]

an awakening , excellent expression of feeling

[Rachel Koepke]

wow!! I thought ur other writing was great but this is the best so far, I shivered when I read it

[serpent]

Moment of inner freedom
when the mind is opened and the
infinite universe revealed
& the soul is left to wander
dazed & confus'd searching
here & there for teachers & friends


thats how i felt!

[Adam :P]

i liked this. it ended to soon. should add more to it!.
overall wonderfful poem i enjoyed reading it. write more!