The Hanged Man and The Fool

A Random poem of random thoughts leading between two worlds which collide in an insane mind.

Love is a powerful thing shouts the hanged man  

as all else fails it shall still live on.

 And in the emptiness it shall fill.

Dreams are victorious and fallow through their role 

life is a matter of thoughts and dreams 

and as I spin around this cordless room 

I wonder for wonders sake

How did I get here and how did I achieve this?

fill me with the ecstasy of knowledge 

teach me knowing of power 

enter the love of the affair between us

and leave the rest to glower.

Passion is my fiend and obsession is the draft in the window 

Desire is the grass beneath my feet 

as you are the sun above my head

Kissing the inches of bodice that are held here

Leaving only a tropical tan of my nirvana 

Where has my solace run away to?

Maybe just a mirage it could have been.

Leave me be in this restless state 

Lend me nothing but endurance 

allow me to suffocate this power which is to great for my eyes

my tranquility is my hell 

And you have the fool. 

Author's Note

You may not understand but that is not always important. Some may say incorrect and others may say I need to better my punctuation. Done on purpose it could be or Lazy I might be. =) Free from error I believe.

Reviews

[Rachel Koepke]

"Passion is my friend and obsession is the draft in the window Desire is the grass beneath my feet, as you are the sun above my head"

that was my favorite part..it was very powerful =))

[Adam :P]

i love the last 2 lines. amazing poem.

[Dave M. Pitman]

I really like this. My favorite line is "life is a matter of thoughts and dreams"..... so true! Great write!