Take care

About a make up and a break up.

Take Care!

 

Take Care

Provisions the soul

He drives a whip

I drive the soul

Ridicule the comforts of home

Chopped up checks

To projects

Disregard the backbone

Trumped up trouble

On my seed sown

Cater to your greedy nature

Laid flat on your back

A sweet taster

Say you're not a money chaser

Long after the night waste ya'

Love the sweet, but hate the savor

Rotten from the misbehavior

Long live the sacred nature

Live strong now or later

She forgave ya' or she's hater

Morganatic condescendence

Complex the independence

One true to repentance

The other just pretended

Now that we square

Take flight take care

Cut the kite string

I might sing silence

Before my hands bring voilence

Take care

Don't ask me how I like your hair

Like your clothes

How I like the divides...

Between your thighs and your nose

Your seductive stare

Don't care... take care!

Might not ever see you took care

Cause you took and took

But despise that nothings there

Fair well don't tell...

Just bail...

And if you ever look back

You'll see I've excelled

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ankhesen Mié]

There are so many lines from this I love:

"Love the sweet, but hate the savor
Rotten from the misbehavior
Long live the sacred nature
Live strong now or later" ( I misread this line at first; my screwed eyes saw "Live longer now or later")

This has got spoken word flow; its rhythm is undeniable. Ooh ooh ooh:

"Fair well don't tell...
Just bail...
And if you ever look back
You'll see I've excelled"--an excellent ending. It captures the spirit of the whole poem.

I sense some fading bitterness, some reigned-in anger as the narrator seeks the triumph embodied in the last line.