A Special Day

You all celebrate your birthday each year because you know how important it is for you .

      

There's a day to remember,

A very special day for you.

That will always make you wonder,

What it meant to you.

The day when you are born,

I bet you don't remember anything.

Still you'll always be celebrating that day, 

Because that day is truly important to you all way.

You opened your tiny eyes for the first time,

And saw how the beautiful sun shine.

You are a gift , send by the God,

So always remember you are very special, not odd,

That was the day when your father and mother were the happiest,

who will always be there to help you in sorrow and loneliness. 

You also smiled for the first time,

without knowing what is good and what is bad.

You moved your hands and legs in all direction,

because you have to grow in a perfection.

Tired , Happy and smiling you slept,

and opened your eyes the next day.

Leaving that very important first day ,

That you don't even remember.

But still it is a very special day for you,

and will always be celebrating that day forever.

Author's Note

Writing a poem for the first time

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' You are a gift , send by the God, ~ So always remember you are very special, not odd, .. '

What a lovely poem! Makes such a change to read gentle and thankful words. To show folk what's important. Maybe we could remember how it was to be innocent and full of goodness rather all those terrible flaws we take on board through life. Gentle applause and a heartfelt THANK YOU..

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Thanks for appreciating that phrase .
also thank you for your generous review

[Maheep Singh Rathore]

You moved your hands and legs in all direction,
because you have to grow in a perfection.
Awesome lines and connective imagination.
Beautiful work dude.
Keep going m/

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

thank you bro :)

[Zelle]

you opened your tiny eyes for the first time,
And saw how the beautiful sun shine.
You are a gift , send by the God,
So always remember you are very special, not odd,
loved it!

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

thanks :)

[Saumya]

this is sooooooooooooooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet ...!!!
realllly wonderfull..!!!!
very well done....!!

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

thanks

[Saumya]

highly welcomed...!!
:)

[Bethany]

"You also smiled for the first time,
without knowing what is good and what is bad."
so true.
This poem really captures the innocence and beauty of a newborn baby.
Beautiful, loved it. Keep writing more!

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

thanks :)

[Imara]

"..all way." I think you mean all ways. With an S.
I love the meaning of this poem. Reminding us that this day, so long ago, that we remember once a year, place so much meaning on that is so special to us, is because we were born. Sometimes we forget how happy we are to be alive until that day, sometimes we for get that our parents love us everyday past our birth and since. For your first time writing I think you did really well, I wasn't expects such skill from someone new. Some of the lines are a little awkward and it kind of messes up the flow but I think if you read this out loud you will be able to easily identify these areas and fix them or find that you don't think they're awkward and keep them. Overall great job this poem makes us appreciate life and takes us back to that moment we have all experienced, whether we remember it or not, being born. Good job :)

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Thanks a lot :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

a lovely poem!

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

THank you :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

there are some grammatical spots...but really a nice piece that makes us think.

i have always been curious what actually goes through our minds when we are born..what are we thinking?

are we glad to be here? are we scared to be here?

what is the first thought that pops into our head...i really like where you took us.

jacob

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Thank you sir for your remarkable review :)

[popourii]

Congratulations on your first poem! You're a natural! Keep up the good work :)

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

thanks :)

[Celina Collot]

It's so beautiful. Are you sure you've never written a poem before?
You have a natural gift. And it's true we celebrate a day we don't even remember.
Hope to see more of this poems soon.

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

This was my first attempt as a poet . thanks for appreciating this :)

[Darian Justine]

I've never seen a poem this good for a first time!
Keep it up, writing ability comes naturally, and I can see you obviously have it :)

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Thankyou !!! :)