The place

A poem about the place were we all come together.

Dark and bright, solid and intangible
        Where floating
              Searching
       Seeking
                      Gathering
       Cluttered thoughts merge and emerge,
                Enter and escape
                              Remembered and forgotten
No one enter this place can break loose, you no one that breaks loose can embark upon.
                       A place where everyone is connected.
             
 

Reviews

[Fenris Wulf]

over all i like the idea, but the last few lines seem disembodied from the piece. i dont know if that was intentional on the authors part or not, i liked the piece overall and it definately has potential