Love at first heart wilt

The never ending story of meeting and love.

Fascination at first sight was for you,
loath at first spoken word I did receive.
Though thine heart did soften I do believe.
For time confines and frees feelings anew.
Other voices advised  to say adieu.
Your blurred expression I did perceive,
causing rushed words, was I wrong to conceive?
My words were clear, un blurred yet rare.
Belief was not considered when words spilt,
and took wing into thine mind's consciousness.
Fleeting time pass, yet no respond was built from thou mind,
molding deep sadness.
Though your gentle words did guard my heart wilt,
unfolding an intense kinship and bound.

 

Reviews

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Wow! This is very poetic
I like the feeling and flow of this write.