In Need Of An Angel

Everyone reaches their breaking point.

Dear guardian angel please tell me you are near,

I'm finally breaking down and I need you here,

My head is pounding at every little noise,

My heart is thumping to hear your voice,

I need you now more than ever before,

Please tell me you'll help me like you swore,

This pain is finally becoming to great,

Everything around me I'm starting to hate,

I'm finally giving up without a fight,

I wish I could walk away from it all tonight,

Let it all come crashing down and burn,

Its something that I deadly yearn,

Guardian angel what can you do?

Will you give me your hand and help me through?

Or will you turn your back and walk away?

Never to look back to where I lay,

Guardian angel are you like the rest?

Are you going to turn your back on me, thinking its whats best?

I have news to scream to this world,

I'm just one little girl,

What makes you think I can do this alone?

Don't you know that I cant survive on my own?

I'm not strong like I want to be,

I'm not smart like I need to be,

I need your help to get through the days,

Because without you, I'll let my life fade,

I'm in need of an angel right now,

I need one someway, somehow,

So please guardian angel can you hear?

Don't you understand how badly I need you near?

Reviews

[Nick'sGirl <3]

Amazing! I love it! i have felt like this before i think everyone has once in their lives!

[Goodbye]

I really like it! :D
There are times when I have felt this way...But writing and reading have made me feel better. :)

[SomerSunshine]

Beautiful (: It hurts to need someone, only to have them turn their back on you.
I only have two critiques- your rhyming gets a little off, and there's a few grammar mistakes- but excellent job!