Little Secrets

Is there really something you want to hide?

One early morning

Up on dandelion hill

In gentle tone

And feathery breath

The wind told me

Its little secrets:

 

How proud the sunset is

At the sight of its colors

Spilling on the rice fields ---

 

How blissful birds are

Watching poppies dance

In rhythm with the breeze---

 

How gentle the sea laughs

As the fish swim its waves

Rolling in a quiet hymn---

 

How lively the forest greets

With trees in summer greens

As fairies begin to sing ---

 

How splendid the night is

Sparkling with soft stars

And fireflies in emerald sheen ---

 

How lonely the great sky is

Seeing many lovers depart

Shattered with broken dreams---

 

I blew the dandelion tufts

And felt the mild caress

On my face ---

 

I smiled,

And whispered to the wind---

 

“Would you like to hear mine?”

 

 

Reviews

[FateDictates]

A great visual splendour that drifts along melodically and then finally parting, leaving me with a smile.. I really enjoyed this..

[Endeavor]

Thank you very much! :)

[Ambra Celeste]

I like the unusual scenario of talking to the wind. My favourite parts: poppies dancing in rhythm and the see laughing. It is so very imaginative.

[Endeavor]

I'm glad you liked it. :)

[just Penny]

You use the elements and the environment beautifully in this write. I love the final lines. A delightful poem, well done. Penny

[Endeavor]

Thank you very much, Penny. :)

[Emily]

Love this poem! Well done.

[Condos Deal]

A conversation with the wind. Very poetic. I love the descriptive language you use when you discuss nature and it's beauty. (I.e. summer greens, emerald sheet, quiet hymn)

Very nice.

[Endeavor]

Thank you very much!

[Madalyn Beck]

This is a beautiful write. I felt soothed just reading it! Great job! (:

[Endeavor]

Thank you very much!

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is so beautiful.. :]

[Endeavor]

Thanks for stopping by. :)