Words Fly

Words Fly

A Poem by Divenita Er
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Words fly from one phrase to another

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Words like birds fly, 
Without a sky, 
In phrases, it swoons 
Waking up.. 
Like the bird, 
the words fly, 
to another nest, 
to another sky

Sometimes,
it nests in phrases and metaphors,
but wakes up from the slumber
It flies again, 
owned by none,
like a w***e

© 2012 Divenita Er


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I like this but I do feel you have got to decide if it is one word or many...It should be 'THEY swoon, surely and sometimes THEY nest in phrases...I then think the last piece would read better as 'but WAKE up from the slumber to fly again...just a thought...good idea though, this...I have never tried writing about words this way...well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


Divenita Er

12 Years Ago

Oh thank you! :)

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Divenita Er
Divenita Er

Hyderabad, India



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