Thoughts Of Ether

Passion can never die

What’s the meaning when you’re living to die?

Worthless when all your possessions fry

When the world strips you naked and you got nothing left,

Passion can always be found in one’s breath,

So now analyze... they ask me why?

To relieve sadness, to tell what I don’t speak about.

A bunch of starters but never a finisher, never diving deeper.

Open more eyes to humbleness, and how cruel the world is,

 To make someone become what they have always hated.

Truly just want belonging, and recognition.

A way to mend scars and restore my once bright picture.

Respected by those I despise, as tarnished lies settle in my own eyes.

I is stopping me but myself also fuels the dream.

Going on when it’s hard, but giving up when it’s impossible.

Maybe I fear the word "I'm possible". But when action and words don’t combine

All that’s left is a thread of hope on a thin line.

Alone in the city singing a suppressed song,

You can’t be depressed in a life that’s not very long.

Reviews

[Sapientiam]

Very beautiful. Each sentence possessed a significant meaning, which amassed together to form a wonderfully mended message. I can sense your sorrow of living a life that seems meaningless and despairing, yet, you were able to realize that your passion will always be there by your side, brightening life in ways that can hardly be understood. Great job!

[Distant Reality]

Thanks, your review was really meaningful. I'm glad you gathered some of the elements very well.

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful, honest and good words shared.
"Alone in the city singing a suppressed song,
You can’t be depressed in a life that’s not very long."
The above lines are true. Enjoy life. Time goes by very quickly. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Distant Reality]

Thank you coyote for taking the time to read and sharing how you feel about it, It means alot to me.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this poem and you are welcome.

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Very powerful message. Tells to go through the tough times quickly and not roam around being depressed since there's only little time left. I really liked the message you sent through this poem. Good job :)

[Distant Reality]

Thank you very much. (:

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Your welcome :)