Desert Winds

Desert Winds

A Poem by dramamine

There was once a boy who knew nothing but the color red to be true.

He saw it soak the sands, he held it in his hands, and he witnessed it circle around his mother’s head for this he did not understand.

He could feel his bones tremble as the ground did the same.

The walls concealing him from the desert winds began to crumble and slip in shame.

Caged within the only world he knew, the darkness and dust would carry him home,

To a place he once drew on a little shell that turned his mother blue.

Her skin cold to the touch, the silence could no longer be heard,

Over the deafening roars of the black-clouded sky and the bombs that built the only walls he knew,

The flames began to paint the horizon, a color he knew to be true, as the cries of the children lost shattered the sun in two,

His innocence was taken hostage and his smile was now buried deep inside,

Twenty one pilots broke the sky above, spilling blood and hiding lies in the unspoken goodbyes.

The boy was now among the ones in the clouds above, holding his mother’s hand as his bones lay buried beneath the sand.

There was once a boy who knew nothing but his smile that was taken for this he began to understand.   

© 2015 dramamine


Author's Note

dramamine
The number of pilots mentioned is just a random number, anyway please let me know your thoughts.

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the haunts of war often bury the innocent...collateral damage in any amount is too much...such a wonderfully sad story about a boy knowing and death and violence when he should have been enjoying all the things childhood is supposed to bring...as i read this i thought of all the wars past and present in which children are forced to come to terms with the color red far too early...no rainbows here...great write, Twiggy

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Outstanding piece of work, about war...and it's aftermath. remind me... why is humanity such a bloody, cold, killing machine?
100 points

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem!!
Keep on writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


the haunts of war often bury the innocent...collateral damage in any amount is too much...such a wonderfully sad story about a boy knowing and death and violence when he should have been enjoying all the things childhood is supposed to bring...as i read this i thought of all the wars past and present in which children are forced to come to terms with the color red far too early...no rainbows here...great write, Twiggy

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The sentence structure takes all the flow out of your poem as a whole, but a few lines explode with it. I would not change it other than to post it as a paragraph short story, it reads to good as a story to mess with it in any other way :~)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 18, 2015
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Tags: dark, poetry, life, death, hate, sad, war, red

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You can call me Twiggy.I'm just a 16 year old girl. With no friends so I spend my time writing s****y tales, poetry, and listening to music. I hope to one day become a musician and you know start a ba.. more..

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