Society

Might be a bit controversial

Society, notoriety, sobriety.

Hypocrisy and conformity. 

The dynasty of disease. 

The piracy of sanity. 

The portrait of an American family. 

Get your gun. Slay your mother’s son. 

Pay the bill. Plight of the suicide pill and mentally ill. 

She’s dressed to kill with her abortion pill. 

Crawl into your cave. Enslave your grave. 

A new crave for the depraved. 

Your perfect lie unraveling at the seams. 

The broken dream regime. A scheme for the masses. 

Children hidden. Forbidden. 

Pray to obey. Decay. 

Fall unto the knife. Come to life. 

A pill to make you dumb. Succumb to your scars. 

Smoke your cigar. Follow the North Star. 

Bleed to be freed. You overfeed greed. 

The speed of your plead. 

Frightened and weak. 

Romanticizing your mystique. 

Reality is bleak. Forever asleep.    

Reviews

[Bear]

I have been binge reading your poetry this morning and world just be repeating things I have already said about many of your other poems. I can say this, your choice of topics is very relatable and shows you are an intelligent young lady. It has been a pleasure reading you work.

[dramamine]

Thank you so much for reading my poetry. I highly appreciate your kind words. You just made my day.

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Really enjoyed this look at society through your eyes... you cover a lot of ground in so few words... I've read several of your pieces and your get-to-the-point approach is refreshing... well-done!

[Some Kind of Poet]

Your writing is so relatable to other people. It has truth in it, it has so much honesty. Your poetry speaks to the heart of everybody feeling this way!
I'm going to read over your other writing you've uploaded and I'm excited to read it all. Keep up the amazing work, and smile!

[dramamine]

Thank you, and I hope you found my other poems to be adequate.

[Lizardo]

I really like this poem, it speaks truth.
This is a reall piece full of wisdom, I like reading things like this.
it makes me think that at least some people really are seeing what we're put through in society's pression to become like "them" and not like we want to be.
Good piece

[dramamine]

Thank you! I really appreciate it.

[Kurayami]

I quite like this poem that you wrote. I think the rhyming scheme is appropriate for the topic. There is a depth to the words in the poem. I think you did a good job overall. Well done.

~Kurayami