Complex sentence structure. Momentarily de-familiarizing the blasé.
At the garden by the window of that social gathering I stand by and you approach. the third light, which stays permanently neither on the outside nor the inside or by the window with its radiance, how nice it is for you to speak to me. Do you not want to come inside? Why, You caress with your voice. I? Not on this second… perhaps. I ask you, what do you think of the glassware they use for the wine? You respond with a sincere smile, connoting that inquiring for opinion on the host’s taste in glassware instead of in wine is queer and amusing, yet we both know what we’re conversing on is the conservative question of whether these glasses are a pair of quarter empty or a set of two-eighths full.
I can more tell about feelings . I am not really good to make any reviews. I can feel here warmth while over conversation from window with your friend. I was thinking if you broke up sentences and move with words around you can make quite wonderful mix of emotions. Just like when people get happy drunk. This is only thing what i can say about it. How say it's make nice feeling of connection. thanks for that.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you for the feedback. It's still valuable to know what readers feel. I tend to use my brain mo.. read moreThank you for the feedback. It's still valuable to know what readers feel. I tend to use my brain more when I write, sometimes to the point of not putting enough feeling into it, unless it's something depressing perhaps. I appreciate your comment.
7 Years Ago
I am happy my comment have good impact. I have another problem. My writing go more through the emoti.. read moreI am happy my comment have good impact. I have another problem. My writing go more through the emotions there is not too much logic . Sometimes is hard write any meaning so i must re write and start again.
I can more tell about feelings . I am not really good to make any reviews. I can feel here warmth while over conversation from window with your friend. I was thinking if you broke up sentences and move with words around you can make quite wonderful mix of emotions. Just like when people get happy drunk. This is only thing what i can say about it. How say it's make nice feeling of connection. thanks for that.
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you for the feedback. It's still valuable to know what readers feel. I tend to use my brain mo.. read moreThank you for the feedback. It's still valuable to know what readers feel. I tend to use my brain more when I write, sometimes to the point of not putting enough feeling into it, unless it's something depressing perhaps. I appreciate your comment.
7 Years Ago
I am happy my comment have good impact. I have another problem. My writing go more through the emoti.. read moreI am happy my comment have good impact. I have another problem. My writing go more through the emotions there is not too much logic . Sometimes is hard write any meaning so i must re write and start again.
Hiraya or haraya? Whichever, I need to get myself a Filipino dictionary.
The word means imagination, while the other word (diskarte) has something to do with street smarts or being business-minded.. more..