Adriatic love

Adriatic love

A Poem by Dische

Lost in
Overwhelming
Vicious
Emotions

© 2011 Dische


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Short but powerful! Wonderful for a Valentine's Card!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Pros: Oh, look a there, an acrostic for love. Clever, clever, my friend. And it sums up lover perfectly, doesn't it? No matter if the love is perfect without a hitch, or something you fight for, its always born of vicious, powerful emotions.

Cons: Not a con at all, but a mere suggestion. Would there be any way you could reword the first line to get rid of the word "in" yet still have a word that starts with an "L?" Not sure if there is, and don't worry about it :) It's good as is.

Overall: Very nice :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on January 24, 2011
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Dische
Dische

Halifax, sault ste marie, Nova scotia, ontario, Canada



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