Pros: Oh, look a there, an acrostic for love. Clever, clever, my friend. And it sums up lover perfectly, doesn't it? No matter if the love is perfect without a hitch, or something you fight for, its always born of vicious, powerful emotions.
Cons: Not a con at all, but a mere suggestion. Would there be any way you could reword the first line to get rid of the word "in" yet still have a word that starts with an "L?" Not sure if there is, and don't worry about it :) It's good as is.
Halifax, sault ste marie, Nova scotia, ontario, Canada
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Hi my name is Adam. I am 13 years old and started writing a few months ago. A lot of my work is sad because for me happiness doesn't come often. Unfortunately. Poetry is one of the only things I have .. more..