I promise

For you Felica Mariiee

If I loved you,

Would you love me?

If I opened up to you,

Would you open up to me?

If I promised not to lie to you,

Would you never lie to me?

If I hurt you can you kill me?

Because hurting you is wrong.

Your too amazing, too innocent,

To ever deserve it.

But I wont hurt you,

I promise.

I promise to put you first no matter what.

I promise to care about you no matter what.

I promise to do watever you want me to.

I promise to only love you.

I promise not to lie.

I promise not to cheat.

I promise not to leave you

If you love me.

 

Dedication: My beautiful, AMAZING girlfriend, Felica Mariiee

Reviews

[Jeff]

What a great poem and perfect for dedicating to your girl!

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

Really loved this heartfelt poem your girlfriend like many others before me have said is very lucky, you really know how to show your emotion and the promises were a great touch I hope she reads your work this talent should never be hidden keep the great poems coming

this is so sweet, and caring. such an amazing poem. Felica you have an amazing guy, hold on to him!

[Lindsey]

This is a wounderful poem. This is the kind of poem every girl wishes someone would give to them and MEAN IT. Felica is luck to have a person who would do this for her. It's great.

[GamingGal]

Pros: I like all the questions and promises in this piece. They give it a heartbeat, and help it flow rather nicely. And the last line would have to be my favorite. Not sure why.

Cons: None.

Overall: I like it :)

[Dilan Gray]

This is so cute! I love all the promises, they show how much you care! This is beautiful and I'm so glad you found someone who makes you feel all these things. Wonderful poem!

[morningstar]

This was really sweet. Shows you really care about your girlfriend and show lots opf emotion. I loved it :) thanks for sharing

[A]

Sweet romantic love letter :) she is a lucky girl indeed!
great job.