The monster that is pain

It is under supernatural catogory because that is what I think pain is, the supernatural.

Pain is a desease that starts in you heart,

Then it seaps through your vains and tares you apart,

It then flows with you blood, through you body it flies,

Until it squeezed you and makes you just wanna die,

But that isn't all it get worse,

It goes to your head, throws your thoughts of course,

When it thinks it wants to be done it goes to your eyes,

Thats when you finally snap and start to cry,

It runs down your eyes then decides that its not done yet,

So it goes from your eyes back to your head,

Thinks get all hazzy you can no longer think,

Is goes to you breathing, makes you feel like your about to sink,

You can barely breathe but its still not done,

Because it still has a tight grasp on your lungs,

Thats why you cant breath and you just want to die,

But the monter is still not ready to say goodbye,

He freezes you legs so you can no longer walk,

You need help but you can no lomnger talk,

It takes your wrists and cut them until bleed,

Thats when it decides it wants to leave,

But it is too late now the monster is stuck,

You can't get rid of the pain no more, now your out of luck,

It kicks and it screems looking for a way out,

But now that it's trapped its starts to shout,

When it falls asleep and you start to think it's played all its cards,

It just wakes up and does it again when you throw down your guard.

Reviews

[Jeff]

Great description of pain!

[FallenHeroXx]

Great
i liked it

Fallen

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

This Is defiantly the kind of poem that appeals to me and like many of your over pieces this one was really well written technically perfect with great flow and the imagery was very clear due to your descriptive language well done

it was vivid, descriptive and emotional. just amazing. i love the way you chose your words and they flowed so well.

[felica mariiee]

Creative interperation of the word pain