Loves neverending track

When you fall so hard that you can't get up,

Like you dug yourself a hole and you got stuck.

I've gone too far and now I can't go back,

Im stuck on loves neverending track.

 

You loved me once but the soon passed,

I was a controling, obnoxious, selfish a*s.

But that's not who I am you see,

I'm gonna change the was you look at me.

I still love you more then you could ever know,

This is what I do to make my feeling show,

Well you got a boyfriend now so I'm done,

Tryin' to get you to love me.

 

When you fall so hard that you cant get up,

Like you dug yourself a hole and you got stuck.

I've gone too far and now I can't go back,

I'm stuck on loves neverending track

 

I've dug my grave I better step inside,

The coffin Ive built myself with pride.

Well that coffin is burnin to the ground tonight,

I'm in the coffin of shame that fits me right.

I'm losing you, the one I love,

To the foolish games that im made of.

Im a selfish controlling ugly monter,

Im scared that that's what Im turning into, a monter.

I'm just blinded by you and how amazing you are,

And I'm tryin' to get you to love me.

 

I've fallen so hard now I can't get up,

I've dug myself a hole and I got stuck.

I've gone so far now I would die to go back,

But I can't, it's loves neverending track.

 

Reviews

[Katharine Eilene]

Agree, I envisioned this poem as a rap. A good read.

[Jeff]

Amazing work on this one. It could be a song very easily!

wow, this was beyond amazing. i felt the emotions you put into it. it honrstly brought a tear to my eye.

[Dische]

Don't cry and thank you :)

[felica mariiee]

Dische this amazing. I'm ready to cry