Suicide note

"When you feel you're the problem you make wrong choices and hurt others"

My sweet Rose flower
this is not perpetual
I am dying like ur petal
I can't live in pretense
I know you hate me
l love you.
I am sorry
I'll have to let go
I have lived for you
I have fought for you
I hope the one you love
will be there for you
and will not break your heart of glass

Dark angel
I shall no longer see you
but you'll continue to show
the world your sunshine;
your expression of joy
after hearing my last words
and crying your last tears for me
I was a fool to trust you
I was trapped by your
false outward expressions
I told you i'd die without u
but now it doesn't make
a difference with u or without u

Goodbye loving enemy
after all the happy days
the judgement has come
we should separate
for it all did'nt belong to us
it was a mistake
so i will let these words
witness my soul depart my body
You are free to roam butterfly
But know that
I loved you
and I'll have always.

Author's Note

I guess this one is good .

Reviews

[Terrence Chang]

Well suicide is a tragedy to people who wants to live. And it is such a shame that a person could not endure the suffering and takes this catastrophic choice. But how can I judge when I am not in his or her shoes. I can only pray for her peace. Nothing more nothing less. Well written

[Connie MaryN]

Thanks for your review it tells me how the poem is understood.I just imagined how'd feel if someone left me a suicide note I'd fail to rescue him/her and it would be hard to fail to correct the mistake in someone's mind till they lose their life.I once felt like commiting suicide but i realised that would cause much more pain so I am still living unregretfuly.