Existence

The people who survive a war with all hopes lost

Healed were they. Their souls bled to death.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Eleanor]

You said a lot in few words. Only a few can do that :)
Just a single line expressed the pain you were trying to make the readers feel.
Great one :)

[Dipanjan Dutta]

Thanks mate...pleasure that my readers felt it

[Jeffrey David]

Once again you have said so much with so few words. You have a gift that way. So many have suffered the fate that your writing speaks of. War seems to be all to big a part of human nature.

[Dipanjan Dutta]

Thanks Jeffrey for the nice review

[An owl on the moon]

Such a painful glimpse across time and space... to all who suffer in war... Even the survivors are forced to bleed in the depths of their souls... Powerful.

[Dipanjan Dutta]

yeah...those who are dead are gone forever...but those who survive they are the ones who actually suffer the aftemath...could be the loss of their own...could be the loss of home or others...at the end of the day they live with a dead spirit and it takes long to overcome...may be lifetime as well..

thanks for the review Craig..