Reasons

Reasons

A Story by Dipanjan Dutta
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The world has changed...to the evil

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We resembled the human beings. Not by looks but by nature. We lived demeaning others because we liked it and took pride in it. We enjoyed being coward. Not because we weren't brave but we vouched for the escapists. We outnumbered them, literally and unintelligently.

We created nightmares because we were scared of it. We nurtured malevolence because we strengthened on it. We called them dumb because they said what we don't understand.

Yet, we live today, on their tombs, not because we dare death but we fear it.

© 2014 Dipanjan Dutta


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Well i do get the message you are trying to put though.
Hope is most likely lost for human kind .
Now coming to the negatives.
This piece could definately use editing, there are quieter a few no of grammatical errors to cause problems.
Spend a little more time on it will help the piece a lot.

But all in all well done.

Thank you for sharing.
-Angad

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dipanjan Dutta

10 Years Ago

Angad, thanks for your detailed review. I appreciate that. Could you please point iut the grammatic.. read more
Dipanjan Dutta

10 Years Ago

And also all my writings are free to interpret and I am glad that you have done so in your way...but.. read more
Wisdom Was written here and not of a fool it shows intelligence and thoughtfulness of the subject at hand. Many wood not take a stand at all and back away from such a tough subject. You have handled it with such splendid pride this write is outstanding.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dipanjan Dutta

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the encouraging review

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