Leaving behind my soul

One liner for life beyond death

I stopped, my shadow walked away

Author's Note

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Reviews

[icelandicblue]

Congrats. This is a stellar 6 word story!

[Dipanjan Dutta]

Thank you so much

[MoriartyMesa]

Reminds me of a riddle, in more ways then a question mark.

[Dipanjan Dutta]

Thanks for your review...riddle, isn't that what life is?

[Francois]

Very nice. For me, reading the line just fills me with a kind of sadness.

[Dipanjan Dutta]

Thank you Franc for your review

[Shekinah2015]

Wow! I love this! 5 thousand stars!

[Dipanjan Dutta]

Thanks Victoria...

[Word to the heartless]

Your one liner wraps a lot of mystry in it.......... eagerly waiting for it to be unwhirled..........

[Dipanjan Dutta]

Thanks friend...mystry does take a bit of time but definitely unfurls itself...

[Marie]

That is almost a horror story, isn't it?

[Dipanjan Dutta]

Thanks Marie for your review...never meant to scare my readers :) :)

[Jeffrey David]

That is one powerful line. A true talent to be able to say so much with so few words. Thanks for sharing this.

[Dipanjan Dutta]

Thanks Jeffrey...its a pleasure that you liked it

[Pax]

oh, nice, very profound, it is like how we write, we leave a fragment of our soul behind all our piece...
you should post this as poem, my friend, it does cover a poetic one liner piece...

[Dipanjan Dutta]

Thanks Pax, I am glad that you liked the one liner...I will definitely consider re-posting it as a poem