Looking Through A Tear

Cried while writing this one

I'm sorry for the things that were said

I'm sorry I made you wish you were dead

Now I see where my complaint has lead

I'm sorry for every tear that was shed

 

As I look back on my past, I see it

The peices of this puzzle are begining to fit

Everything I have done to hurt you, I'm regreting it

 

I haven't shown you proper respect, I apologize

I feel so unworthy of your love, tears fall from eyees

 

I love you mom you brought me here

So wipe your eyes, shed not another tear

Never feel that I don't love you, it's always here

This poem is choppy I know but its the best I can do while looking through a tear

 

Dustin Davis Dec. 6 2009

Author's Note

Always make sure that the ones you love know it....

Reviews

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i agree you should always tell that someone hat you love them ..... i like this very much

[Cassandra D.]

This poem was very touching.
The rhyme scheme in it made it flow so nicely.
You're a talented poet. :]

[Annabel Lee]

wow this is amazing and so sweet! I can relate soo much. Amazing poem- almost made me cry :-(

[ღSherion~Raine..]

AWWWW! This poem is very depressing and it shows it! My favorite line is "Now I see where my complaint has lead,I'm sorry for every tear that was shed"

[Kelley]

Awwww that touched me deeply!
Thanks for sharing.

[Aislinn Gryffin ((Ashes..]

Wow...this was so amazing i'm speechless...

[Blue Rose]

Extremely Brilliant....the emotions are so clear for the reader to feel!

[misha]

Great poem. There is a lot of emotion in this one and i can feel it.

[A Touch of Insanity:)]

It's really sweet...I truly love the last line. My mom attempted suicide, and I am so very happy she did not succeed. The worst thing about it is, that one of my friends told me attempted suicice was the stupidest thing they had ever heard. Amazing read.

[Mimi]

I really loved this poem. It mad me cry. It really kept the readers attention..