Losing And Finding

Dedicated to LAF; I'm not sure what to say about this one.

Losing and Finding

Losing and finding,

Lost and found;

The key to my heart,

Buried deep in the ground.

 

Losing and finding,

Lost or Found,

I’ll never forget you,

Even if you don’t stick around.

 

Losing and Finding,

It’s a play on words,

For the sweetest flower,

Known to the birds.

 

Losing and Finding,

My sanity and health;

If you give your heart,

To someone else.

 

Losing and Finding,

It’s a simple thing;

Yet as precious,

As your diamond rings.

 

Losing and Finding,

I love and hate,

To see you in this limbo state.

 

 

Losing and Finding,

You are my dear,

We’ll dare for the distance,

Year after year.

 

Lost and Found,

I’ll see you around;

The key to my heart,

Deep beneath the ground.

Reviews

[Lina Grey]

How nice. I agree with Dragon, mainly. Thank you.

[Summer D.]

This was really pretty. I was hoping I'd get some inspiration for a romance piece but my brain is still pretty much dead. I agree, with Dragon. The finishing line for the first part in the poem kind of fell flat. The repetition of certain lines really does help me grasp the feeling here.

I liked it.

[~Dragon X]

Yaaaay! First review!

Ahem. The story, thought, idea and concept was brilliant. I absolutely love the lines

"Yet as precious,
As your diamond rings."

Beautifully beautiful! :D However, the first few stanzas are kinda choppy. The syllables used kind of vary and that kind of stunts the flow of words for me.
But I'm sure you'll be able to fix that and I didn't catch any grammar issues! Yay! *applause*