I love the rhyme. Sad, and I can totally relate to it. I'm sure we all relate to that sometimes, but life is full of good times and bad. Also, I like the flow of this poem.
(By the way, I don't know if you noticed previously, but I wrote my poem 'Hope' sort of in response to this one - and what you told me) :)
I love the rhyme. Sad, and I can totally relate to it. I'm sure we all relate to that sometimes, but life is full of good times and bad. Also, I like the flow of this poem.
(By the way, I don't know if you noticed previously, but I wrote my poem 'Hope' sort of in response to this one - and what you told me) :)