Mrs. Lonely

Mrs. Lonely

A Chapter by Miss Evans
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Nothing important. Random poem.

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Mrs. Lonely

Sometimes I feel like Mrs. Lonely,
And it doesn't matter what you say.

I can't remember the last time,
No never,
Anyone begged for me not to go away.

I guess I'm not so important,
But am I even important at all?

I feel like Mrs. Lonely.
I have no one at all.


© 2011 Miss Evans


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I love the rhyme. Sad, and I can totally relate to it. I'm sure we all relate to that sometimes, but life is full of good times and bad. Also, I like the flow of this poem.

(By the way, I don't know if you noticed previously, but I wrote my poem 'Hope' sort of in response to this one - and what you told me) :)

Anyways, loved it! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Every single word in this poem seems to fit the description of my life right now.

Even though I know it's not true. I've got a lot to love and I should be thankful.

But...why?

I don't know.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ami N.

12 Years Ago

Except the Mrs. part >_>
I love the rhyme. Sad, and I can totally relate to it. I'm sure we all relate to that sometimes, but life is full of good times and bad. Also, I like the flow of this poem.

(By the way, I don't know if you noticed previously, but I wrote my poem 'Hope' sort of in response to this one - and what you told me) :)

Anyways, loved it! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ditto. I'm in a somber mood right now.
Nice scheme, very nice.

Simple.
I like it.

* 90 *



Posted 13 Years Ago



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