Wildcat

Just musings of my mind about a certain someone... for once I'm actually completlely satisfied with a piece... now I'm sharing it, so enjoy.

Your wild inner creature
released with unbridled pleasure
and ferocity upon me.
Your heart beat coincides
with the patter of rain drops and
and feet of hideous beasts in the
surrounding wilderness.
Your heavy breathing on my neck
speaking the soft whispers
of the wind’s untold secrets.
You love fiercely
and make your pleasure well known
with vivid displays of terribly perfected passion,
and ominous presence of unstoppable lust.  
The fiery depths of your’ eyes
lurking mysteriously in the shadows
of this proverbial jungle
as you stalk wearily for your’ next hunt.
I am your prey.
I am your subject.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think =]

Reviews

[Dani California]

Whew!!
Dillon.... this is ... exceptional :)
And so passionate!
I really like this .. a lot.

You have a lot of talent my friend. With each new piece
I read of yours, it seems to further emerge.

The fiery depths of your' eyes
lurking mysteriously in the shadows
of this proverbial jungle
as you stalk wearily for your' next hunt.
I am your prey.
I am your subject.

This piece surely appeals to my inner animal.. lol!
Seriously, it's outstanding!

[Tessa]

"vivid displays of terribly perfected passion,
and ominous presence of unstoppable lust."

I really like these images and word choice.

[Wildfleour]

I like the idea of being someone's prey. It's a touch of danger and excitement.

[Nely Amorim]

ahh once again you have captured a wonderful passion within your words and as always i am inspired by your talent.:)

[Poetic Injustice]

Powerful imagery once again.

[Lestat's daughter]

I love it, a few spelling/grammar errors but otherwise this is really good!

[Sydelle Houston]

This is steamy, I'm fanning over here! LOL Very nice!

Fix that itty bitty typo in line 4: hear = heart and you're good to go.