I KNOW THE ANSWER

Maybe that is life!

A few strides ahead

And then cease.

Laugh of a minute

After an hour cry.

Meagre of daydream

Mountain of woe.

Azure sky to wonder

A corner to sleep.

...

A week of your love

Months of longing.

Maybe that is life!

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is a great example of choosing meaningful details that POP! You offer a few examples of how life goes, relatable, yet also stated in a unique way. In a way, your final verse could be a celebration of the old saying: absence makes the heart grow fonder . . . that is, sometimes it can be a good thing to save up your loving feelings for a bit just to feel the intensity of reunion! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Digvijay Singh]

Hey Margie, thank you for the read and comment. I'm glad you liked it.

[Fairy Khan]

The dilemma that you are facing is quite evident in these verses. Nice one.

[Digvijay Singh]

Thanks Fairy

[Vin]

Nice meddling with words my friend! I liked the terms you put in- getting a whistling feeling:)

Keep flying!

[Digvijay Singh]

Thanks for the read Vin

[Rye]

deep write.love the last stanza

[Digvijay Singh]

Thank you Rye

[Karmee]

So well said and written, I enjoyed your words

[Digvijay Singh]

Thank you for the read kitseth

[Karmee]

not a problem