MY BEST KISS?

Oh no! 

I won't talk of the rain here

Nor of the kiss after that fancy dinner

Or of the one after our fight

It was just another thursday evening

We were outside of the metro junction

"I need to tell you something" she said

"What? Everything ok?"

We stood wordlessly in quarrelsome world around

And she kissed

standing on her toes.

...

Of million kisses we have had,

why this is my best i would never know.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I love your msg -- it's not a kiss in a fancy situation, but ordinary kisses that are most memorable. The everyday affection sustains people more than those once-a-month date nights or once-a-year vacations. Your "standing on toes" line is the THING that makes this ordinary kiss memorable & it goes well with artwork. I would use a different word, not "fancy" . . . too general for me. I like choosing more detailed words with imagery. Was it a succulent sushi dinner? Was it curry dinner at a curious diner? Don't forget to play with words as you develop your interesting messages! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Laura Kate]

This is beautiful, I saw imagery as if it were a film. It sounds as if you were taken by surprise, perhaps that’s why it was more memorable than most.

[Unspoken poet]

standing on toes, I like that. This is so wonderful

[Digvijay Singh]

Thank you for the read

[Unspoken poet]

not a problem

[Jade]

Aww, such a sweet cute write. Very nicely expressed.

[Digvijay Singh]

Thank you for the comment Jade