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Sitting on a bench 

at the bus stop,

I hear the rain drops.

Everyone's rushing.

It's going to be dark 

In few minutes.

..

Sitting on a bench

at the bus stop.

I'm thinking about you.

Still.

Reviews

[S.Fischer]

I have always loved a nice simple piece of poetry and I enjoyed reading yours. You quickly create a atmosphere and image within this piece and I like the repetition of the first two lines, it gives me an impression of context but the real focus of the writer is that person they are thinking of. Nicely done.

[Digvijay Singh]

Hey, thanks for the read Fischer❤️

[Sig]

A few simple words and I am there - seeing it, hearing it, feeling it.
Thank you

[Fairy Khan]

I love the simplicity of words and thoughts in this one.

P.S. The last line of the first stanza should have been ‘In a few minutes’, I think.

[Nishant Pandey]

Still I am thinking about her

[Karmee]

this is such a sweet wonderful write here.

[Digvijay Singh]

Thank you Kitseth

[poetgurl]

Now I totally love this write, This is so good. Really enjoyable read

[Digvijay Singh]

Thank you Kimmie