11:11 WISH

Why it's just me,

To have us 'together' in a dream?

To search your fingers when we walk gardens?

Do you not think of me when clock clicks 11:11?

...

Do you not look for a shooting star?

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Everyone must have someone who is distant, that we think of at certain times of the day & night. That idea of wondering if the other person can feel us thinking of him/her, this is a universal thing that most people wonder about. I love how you put this into a playful loving poem with great details. I love this line: "search your fingers when we walk gardens" -- most original way to describe "holding hands"! This is the kind of fresh magic I love to see in a poem. Saying something we all recognize, but in a fresh new way (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Digvijay Singh]

Thank you Margie. Your comment just brightens my day ❤️

[Rye]

Pure genius work here, well done. I love seeing the clock at 11:00.
Awesome!

[Digvijay Singh]

Thank you Ryanna

[Kelly Scheppers]

You need not be a literary genius to know the love within the weight of your words. It sounds to me like someone is a romantic at heart!

[Digvijay Singh]

And to me it's like someone is always modest to say good words. Thank you Kelly