October's gone

some friday morning lost in mist
and i knew october's gone

Like gone are the leaves
some by winds.. some fell for self..
sun back to clouds
moon too looks shy
Birds singing less or they have gone south
All waiting for summer to come around

Though not me for i have walked enough
Seen enough.. sang enough
...
But I'll keep you all in thought
like the October..
October that was my last..

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Your writing is so unusual & expressive & interesting, I'm sorry you only have two poems posted. I hope you will be posting more soon. Your writing sounds a little bit like "broken English" (as we call it when it sounds like English is not your first language) . . . but this is NOT a bad thing. Actually, it adds a bit of charm to your style, becuz you have a sparse, jagged writing style. Your words feel like they are being dropped here & there, rather than being like a flow. Again, this is NOT a bad thing. It's just something distinctive about your writing style & if you are aware of it, you can use it & enhance it, if you know what I mean (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Digvijay Singh]

Thanks for this comment and I'm glad you liked it. And thanks for the suggestions.. (((HUGS to you too)))