(U)(N)(T)(I)(T)(L)(E)(D) THREE

ramblings

Cant anybody see?

Cant you see?

I have got these demons all coiled up inside me

sliding into my heart

Invading my soul

I want so bad

to sin

to feel a rush

The rush when you do wrong

Can you save me from myself?

I have nobody it feels like

and I cant feel my lungs 

Surely I should know

how to breathe

without someones tongue down my throat

feels like I once could

but those times are dead and gone

It just feels so wrong.

Author's Note

There are 5 of these

Reviews

[The Seasonal Girl]

Yeah it does feels wrong and your words are so right.. The insecurity, wanting to escape, the helplessness - is all seen. It's sad that someone so near you just cannot see what's going on inside..Sigh..

Hugs, take care :)

[Rob Santana]

Sick piece!!! I like how you express yourself, no holding back well done.

[Diella Notsu Eret]

Thank you :)